Thoughts on 2D Intro?

[moon10k]

Hi. I makes 2D intros and stuff. DM me if you want to buy one. I sell em at low prices.

Hi again. Was hoping to have some opinions on this. Maybe some feedback/rating telling me what I could add, remove, or change. T h a n k s.

 

[DatAyy]

The sound at the start... ( there is none )

 

[Dad]

Hawt intro! Should maybe remove the P in the middle. it kind of makes you focus more on that then the intro itself.

 

[moon10k]

Hawt intro! Should maybe remove the P in the middle. it kind of makes you focus more on that then the intro itself.

Thats just the watermark so people don't steal it straight of YT. It's obviously not in the Intro file given to the client.[DOUBLEPOST=1511286856][/DOUBLEPOST]

The sound at the start... ( there is none )

Yeah that's supposed to be like that. That's just the watermark doing its thing

 

[Dad]

Thats just the watermark so people don't steal it straight of YT. It's obviously not in the Intro file given to the client.

Then maybe at least add some music at the start. its kind of bad when the music just pops up from nowhere. try adding some quiet music at the start and when the actual intro starts the music goes louder.

 

[moon10k]

Then maybe at least add some music at the start. its kind of bad when the music just pops up from nowhere. try adding some quiet music at the start and when the actual intro starts the music goes louder.

Alrighty! Gotcha fam, will do that!