Thoughts on thread design?

[Zyaf]

This is only my second thread design. Please give honest opinions.
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[MonkeyMouse]

To be Honest, not bad for a start but I think the things that killed it was a number of words that felt like it kept on going and going

Like making Want to Contact us to Contact Us and Saying there are 2 ways Just list the ways Is what I mean

Also Its good to have it evenly spaced and maybe put the different things in boxes

 

[Wesley]

Make the text smaller and keep the header different size from the subtext, also change the font color to something like white.

 

[Kennedy]

I think the second thread design I ever made was one of my best :0

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[Zyaf]

I think the second thread design I ever made was one of my best :0

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jeez way to show me up :/

 

[Zyaf]

Use a better font than comic sans. Please. It hurts me.

Make some like. Shapes and unique designs to separate each text segment, not just a line.

Get a color palette instead of putting text on a random image. https://flatuicolors.com/ (this site is good for that)

Make the texts different sizes. Make the titles bigger, the descriptions or information below them smaller, and any other smaller information that isn't that important the smallest making. Making everything the same size makes the thread look cluttered and unorganized.

I've got a few other suggestions but I really can't think of how to put it into workds

If this sounds harsh in any way, please don't take it that way. I just wanted to give you as much as I could

It's not harsh. It's actually exactly what I'm looking for! Thanks!