Thoughts?

[Christopher]

Hello,

Can I get some feedback on my first piece of music?

Thanks

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[Shroomy]

Basic, sorry fam.

 

[Christopher]

Basic, sorry fam.

I would to see you do better my bruder

 

[thebaum64]

It is nice but something is missing imo

 

[Christopher]

It is nice but something is missing imo

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It is nice but something is missing imo

Do you edit my poll

 

[Saydo]

 

[PinkyFX]

It is missing something. I'm not sure what, but it does sound really good.