Thoughts?

[SSenile]

Thoughts on this?

 

[Furex]

Looks great

 

[Tofty]

Looks great! Where did you get it?

 

[Skylord]

Looking for people in a team?

 

[Jad]

It's good and has a good concept, but personally I think you could improve on a few things:

1. The cinematic in the middle last really long, maybe you could have synced it and added a few more to create a better flow.
2. Typeface could have been improved; better font, increased letter spacing, cleaner colours (to match colour correction maybe?).
3. Colour correction was fine, but I would have made it more clean to match the style of edit you went with.
4. Remove the "We got it" effect.
5. Change or even remove the particle overlay.
6. Clip could have been synced better to show the kill and make it more interesting.
7. Remove the shockwave overlay.

This is all constructive criticism, so you make it as professional as possible, which I guess is what you are going for. You have potential though man

(I'm guessing you edited this)

 

[Ansett]

Sweet website as well. 10/10.

 

[SSenile]

Looks great

Looks great! Where did you get it?

- My friend does this sort of stuff - http://www.javanbarton.net/

Looking for people in a team?

We're not an eSports team, we're an eSports blog

It's good and has a good concept, but personally I think you could improve on a few things:

1. The cinematic in the middle last really long, maybe you could have synced it and added a few more to create a better flow.
2. Typeface could have been improved; better font, increased letter spacing, cleaner colours (to match colour correction maybe?).
3. Colour correction was fine, but I would have made it more clean to match the style of text you went with.
4. Remove the "We got it" effect.
5. Change or even remove the particle overlay.
6. Clip could have been synced better to show the kill and make it more interesting.
7. Remove the shockwave overlay.

This is all constructive criticism, so you make it as professional as possible, which I guess is what you are going for. You have potential though man

(I'm guessing you edited this)

Thanks, I'll let the guy who did it know (http://www.javanbarton.net/)

Sweet website as well. 10/10.