Thoughts?

[Akmed]

So today i made my first thread design would like some feedback on how to improve and your thoughts. be 100% honest.

 

[Veev Design]

I like it!

 

[Akmed]

I like it!

Thanks

 

[Siliz Arts]

I think you're off to a great start, but there are a few key things I'd say need to be worked on.

- Spelling / grammar. There are quite a few mistakes in your writing that just throwing it through an auto correct should fix. This is definitely a big thing because clients don't want to hire someone who can't use proper spelling / grammar on their advertisement threads.
- Personally, I believe you should work on the padding around the sections and icon. There is a lot of space in between the different sections, but in the individual sections, things feel extremely cramped.

 

[Akmed]

I think you're off to a great start, but there are a few key things I'd say need to be worked on.

- Spelling / grammar. There are quite a few mistakes in your writing that just throwing it through an auto correct should fix. This is definitely a big thing because clients don't want to hire someone who can't use proper spelling / grammar on their advertisement threads.
- Personally, I believe you should work on the padding around the sections and icon. There is a lot of space in between the different sections, but in the individual sections, things feel extremely cramped.

Thanks for the feedback going to look into the things to help out in the future

 

[Rwon]

Some stuff to mention out
- Some icons are low res so they look pixelated
- Maybe use less clouds? they are a bit too much
- Icons and sections are not well separated, make sure all sections have the same distance from each other and make the top part (logo and text) a bit farther from the border.
- Some icons are also too big they almost overlay each other, plus they are not organized (Make them same size and the same distance from each other)
- Between Why choose me? and services there is a big gap.

 

[crypted_]

just from a quick look, use some fuckin colour man

also consistency, this is huge. you don't have a lot of it.