Thread Design Critique

[Lerfing]

I'm thinking of redoing this thread, aside from a few typos, how can I improve this thread design?

https://www.mc-market.org/threads/620767/

Edit: What does the thread do right and what does it do wrong?

 

[hgbf]

Tone down the colors. Use white-space as a design asset rather than filling everything with text. Scale down the text.

 

[Great_Array]

I definitely think changing the text shadow colour to gray/black would improve the look. As well changing the yellow text to something else (since the blue and yellow colour are fighting for my eyes attention way too much). Also changing the text font, making it smaller and repositioning it more to the left and right and leaving the middle a bit more empty would improve the look quite a bit as well!

I think a cleaner font with less drop shadow would be nice, maybe smaller text.

Also fancy meeting you here Blastie

 

[celecthost]

I have some improvements you could make:

First of all, make your thread design shorter, only add essential info on your thread design and type the detailed description below your design.

Apart from that, as stated by other users, use less colors, a clean font, less background images or white-spaces in between the different sections.

I hope you are able to use these tips! Good Luck.