Thread Design Feedback

[Christopher]

Hey guys,

Today I ask two things of you, firstly, what do you think of these two thread designs, and secondly, guess which one was made in Photoshop, and which was made in Pages (Word for mac).
EDIT: Without reading the replies

Thank you!

Spoiler: Thread Design One

Spoiler: Thread Design Two

EDIT 2: If it is too hard to see them, right click "Open image in new tab"

 

[SolrRaze]

1st one photoshop, 2nd one pages

 

[Christopher]

1st one photoshop, 2nd one pages

What do you think of them?

 

[SolrRaze]

I like both of them, but if it was me purchasing I would buy the 1st one as I dont really like green/the grass block @ top.

 

[Bdog]

What do you think of them?

They're both nice. One thing that is bugging me is this (nothing major, I'm just a perfectionist ):

 

[Christopher]

They're both nice. One thing that is bugging me is this (nothing major, I'm just a perfectionist ):

Yeah I noticed that, I made that one in 15 mins so

 

[Phewo]

I don't really like them. You use to much cursive curly text and too many boxes. I suggest using curved edges smaller text, and not as much in your face colors. No offense, just constructive criticism.

 

[thatsprettygewd]

I like the 2nd design way better because of how you are able to easily see the whole thing. The first one is a bit too large for me.

 

[Christopher]

I don't really like them. You use to much cursive curly text and too many boxes. I suggest using curved edges smaller text, and not as much in your face colors. No offense, just constructive criticism.

That's all I'm after

I no use curved edges, thanks.

It's so beautiful! But I like 1st one design since it's simple.

1st: PhotoShop
2nd: Pages

I was going for a less Minecrafty design, so it worked out?

I like the 2nd design way better because of how you are able to easily see the whole thing. The first one is a bit too large for me.

Did not think of it that way, interesting



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(Not a necropost because I made it )

 

[Dopey]

the second one if a lot nicer. Also, do you plan to keep that watermark at the bottom upon selling it?

 

[Christopher]

the second one if a lot nicer. Also, do you plan to keep that watermark at the bottom upon selling it?

These ones I give out for free with the watermark, I don't sell others at the moment because I am not confident I can create work of suitable quality to sell.