Thread design

[Airfixking]

Opinions on the design and what should go in the labelled area?
Any feedback would be helpful.

https://prnt.sc/smuf5u

 

[Demeng]

I absolutely detest that shade of yellow for the background

 

[Airfixking]

I agree that’s an error it’s meant to be white

I absolutely detest that shade of yellow for the background

 

[Doughnut]

The yellow is vike but other than that it looks nice - at the bottom you could put contacts, what you offer etc and anything else like additional info and qualifications.

 

[Airfixking]

look better now?

it’s the first thread I have made

 

[Ann a]

you repeat some phrases a couple times ("love helping" etc) so I would just try to find a different way of saying things just because its not an awfully long paragraph. Design wise it looks really good !

 

[Airfixking]

Will do