Hi, i just finished my first trailer and i want to see other's feedback, so let me know what do you think and how much would you pay for it.
Hey that's the song I used in velt 6.0
Like $10 though, there are lots of flaws in the production.
I missed that part. For a first trailer, you are off to a good start, my first was significantly worse in every way.Agree with this that there are some flaws with the production. However, considering that this is your first trailer, I think that it is a great start. If you continue to work hard, you will be able to achieve a much better trailer over time. But as you know, practice makes perfect.
my first was significantly worse in every way.
Hey that's the song I used in velt 6.0
Like $10 though, there are lots of flaws in the production.
Agree with this that there are some flaws with the production. However, considering that this is your first trailer, I think that it is a great start. If you continue to work hard, you will be able to achieve a much better trailer over time. But as you know, practice makes perfect.
I missed that part. For a first trailer, you are off to a good start, my first was significantly worse in every way.
Thanks for feedback! Yea, it is my first one and i made it for free cuz i did not had any portofolio.I gave up on my first and decided that I wanted to do something else instead. I just decided that it wasn't the right area for me. Now I do more coding related things and I want to get into system administration but there is a long way for me to go any a lot of learning for me to do along the way.
No need to credit me, re-using songs doesn't really matter.Thanks for feedback! Yea, it is my first one and i made it for free cuz i did not had any portofolio.
Yep, i really liked the song and i used, sorry, i will give you credits.
What flaws do you see? I mean, don't know. How can i improve and give me some tips
A fix for the leaves is turning the leaves to smart or high in video settings.The first thing that is slightly annoying is the shader pack. It's leaving gaps by the blocks that are empty: https://zak.pink/19-05-21-46-26_836.png
Also, I don't know if it's just me but I don't like the flashing/stuttering of the video here. It makes it look a bit laggy in my opinion: https://zak.pink/19-05-21-47-36_838.mp4
i think i can disable that shadow, but the white parts are from shaders, i will use fancy on the next trailer.Also, another minor thing, but it is a bit annoying having the shadow in the shot here: https://zak.pink/19-05-21-50-27_841.jpg
I am no expert at all in trailers but that's just what I think.
Hi, i just finished my first trailer and i want to see other's feedback, so let me know what do you think and how much would you pay for it.
i know about the framedrops, i dont know how to fix that, i mean, the game works perfect but the recording is really different.. i dont know how to make the obs setting better, maybe you can help me tho.Black bars added in the software = bad
just render in the cinematic ratio and you'll get nicer natural bars / the actual ratio
don't put shake on text
make text transition backgrounds
this song is powerful, needs Twitch transitions
time remapping and sync make no sense pretty much, do you keyframe the song?
frame drops, please render at 24fps
FOV too high!
Do you record in replaymod? I see a shadow floating here and there
As for price.. might be 7$ since there are plenty of people who make 5$/free trailers I think
After effects timeremap effect mostly ties some edges, having RSMB applied makes things smoother and rendering at 24fps makes such stuff barely noticeablei know about the framedrops, i dont know how to fix that, i mean, the game works perfect but the recording is really different.. i dont know how to make the obs setting better, maybe you can help me tho.
Thanks for all tips, i will try my best next time.
i rendered it at 60fps, shoud i render it at 24?After effects timeremap effect mostly ties some edges, having RSMB applied makes things smoother and rendering at 24fps makes such stuff barely noticeable
60fps is for vlogsi rendered it at 60fps, shoud i render it at 24?
thx for the tips, btw im using CMDcam mod, what should i use?60fps is for vlogs
30fps is default
24fps cinematic
so yeah, you want 24fps[DOUBLEPOST=1557006195][/DOUBLEPOST]make sure there are a least 900 frames in every clip though, so slowing down won't cause awkward drops
