Trailer thingy

[Ilay A]

Well, I made that for like 7$ , pretty decent, I want feedback on how to improve since I don't feel like increasing prices yet. Please all of the cinematographers out there, leave feedback.

You are allowed to trash as long as it makes sense!

Example of what I don't want : "I hate the weird speed thingy, it's disgusting, makes the trailer look awful" Even if it was true, it doesn't really explain anything, I want a detailed proper feedback that does make sense like :

"Yo, the velocity sucks, you need to use those effects "List here" and the paint the velocity graph like this : **Enter example here** in the platform **enter here**"

 

[Orestis]

Well, I made that for like 7$ , pretty decent, I want feedback on how to improve since I don't feel like increasing prices yet. Please all of the cinematographers out there, leave feedback.

You are allowed to trash as long as it makes sense!

Example of what I don't want : "I hate the weird speed thingy, it's disgusting, makes the trailer look awful" Even if it was true, it doesn't really explain anything, I want a detailed proper feedback that does make sense like :

"Yo, the velocity sucks, you need to use those effects "List here" and the paint the velocity graph like this : **Enter example here** in the platform **enter here**"

So...
I think you are trying too hard in making something that is not that good.
-Less flashy text effects
-Try to improve your cinematic angles
-Try improving on velocity
-Use less shake
-Try finding music that inspires you to edit
-The sync at the start could be a bit better
You definitely shouldn't rize the trailer prise until you improve on some of the things listed above.
I hope this helped you

 

[Ilay A]

So...
I think you are trying too hard in making something that is not that good.
-Less flashy text effects
-Try to improve your cinematic angles
-Try improving on velocity
-Use less shake
-Try finding music that inspires you to edit
-The sync at the start could be a bit better
You definitely shouldn't rize the trailer prise until you improve on some of the things listed above.
I hope this helped you

I know, I was asked to use the song, from the beginning I knew it would be pretty much a pain, about the velocity, every time I change it, people constantly tell me to change it again, I have no idea whats wrong with it ._. Its fading in and out perfectly

 

[Orestis]

I know, I was asked to use the song, from the beginning I knew it would be pretty much a pain, about the velocity, every time I change it, people constantly tell me to change it again, I have no idea whats wrong with it ._. Its fading in and out perfectly

Just play arround with the velocity until you find something that looks good. Velocity was not that much of a problem here. The thing you really need to improve is camera angles. Try watching a lot of professional trailers so you get ideas about camera angles.

 

[Ilay A]

Just play arround with the velocity until you find something that looks good. Velocity was not that much of a problem here. The thing you really need to improve is camera angles. Try watching a lot of professional trailers so you get ideas about camera angles.

I'll try it in my next trailer thanks, about the text, I know it is too flashy and brings little "Cringey vibe" but that's what happens when people ask for something epic xd not everything is like modern music with good beats and just slowly appearing text