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Deflate · Mar 14, 2016

Iphones4Sale said:
Whats the best way of contact?

Skype.

Deflate · Mar 14, 2016

Iphones4Sale said:
Whats your ksype?

It's in the thread. It's deflatepvp.

Deflate · Mar 15, 2016

remibarna said:
Check out my post if your interested. Good Luck!

http://www.mc-market.org/threads/81343/

I just applied. I truly hope you enjoy it. I'm going out right now to soccer practice, but when I get back I will hop on the server and play

moon10k · Mar 16, 2016

i might need you :3

Deflate · Mar 16, 2016

Furqan said:
i might need you :3

Contact me on my skype: deflatepvp

CaptainJohn · Mar 19, 2016

Don't take this as anything but me being constructive. But your grammar is a bit hit and miss. Your 'what you know' section is also pretty questionable, because it only applies in servers using a very specific set of commands and plugins. You also might want to either put quick descriptions of your previous work or focus on a few shining examples of work and write a detailed description of those.

Also, the rainbow makes it hard to read and can put a bad impression on the reader. Would go for nice clean and simple formatting. GLWS though, just a few things I would fix up

Deflate · Mar 22, 2016

CaptainJohn said:
Don't take this as anything but me being constructive. But your grammar is a bit hit and miss. Your 'what you know' section is also pretty questionable, because it only applies in servers using a very specific set of commands and plugins. You also might want to either put quick descriptions of your previous work or focus on a few shining examples of work and write a detailed description of those.

Also, the rainbow makes it hard to read and can put a bad impression on the reader. Would go for nice clean and simple formatting. GLWS though, just a few things I would fix up

Really? I don't take this as "being constructive," sorry. First of all, I only used 2 colors, green and red. I wouldn't say that's a rainbow, but again, everyone has their own opinion. I already put my "previous work" in the thread. You're the only person who's gave me "constructive feedback." I'm surprised. I also love how you put "If you think what this post says is awesome, make sure to like or agree. It really helps out." Just acknowledge the fact that I'm trying to be nice and do this for free, people with staffing experiences like mine usually charge.

SMKM · Mar 22, 2016

Auhy said:
Really? I don't take this as "being constructive," sorry. First of all, I only used 2 colors, green and red. I wouldn't say that's a rainbow, but again, everyone has their own opinion. I already put my "previous work" in the thread. You're the only person who's gave me "constructive feedback." I'm surprised. I also love how you put "If you think what this post says is awesome, make sure to like or agree. It really helps out." Classic. Just acknowledge the fact that I'm trying to be nice and do this for free, people with staffing experiences like mine usually charge.

I agree with some of his points, your format and the colors aren't attractive. You might want to stick to black/grays in color, and keep not put everything in bold.

Ac3dUd3 · Mar 22, 2016

You have been staff on a lot of servers, to me this looks like you just jump ship to the next big thing and not show loyalty to any one server. If you are staff on multiple servers how can you dedicate time to each one? If they are previous positions why did you leave? They cant of all shut down. And if they did it shows that the staff were not very good to keep it running.
Not attacking you id like these questions answered please

Deflate · Mar 22, 2016

Ac3dUd3 said:
You have been staff on a lot of servers, to me this looks like you just jump ship to the next big thing and not show loyalty to any one server. If you are staff on multiple servers how can do dedicate time to each one? If they are previous positions why did you leave? They cant of all shut down. And if they did it shows that the staff were not very good to keep it running.
Not attacking you id like these questions answered please

I'm not staff on any of these servers currently, if I was then I wouldn't have posted this thread, lol. On Mineplex I resigned because of real life problems. I left the staffing department about 4 months ago because I really wasn't interested. I just put the good sized servers in the list. I have been a staff member on countless tiny servers, maybe 1-2 players a day. Some of these servers are evolutions from one another. AimHCF and PureTeams, both same owner. Some of these servers were owned by me as well. DisasterPvP, LavaHub, LavaFactions and LavaCraft were all my servers. As I said before, I left the staffing department completely because I just wasn't interested anymore honestly. But I'm coming back now because I miss staffing. Every other server was shut down because that was a pretty long time ago that I was a staff member on them.

Isaiahford2000 · Mar 22, 2016

xD i own the domain InsanePVP.net

CaptainJohn · Mar 22, 2016

Auhy said:
Really? I don't take this as "being constructive," sorry.

First of all, I only used 2 colors, green and red. I wouldn't say that's a rainbow, but again, everyone has their own opinion. I already put my "previous work" in the thread. You're the only person who's gave me "constructive feedback." I'm surprised. I also love how you put "If you think what this post says is awesome, make sure to like or agree. It really helps out."

*Sigh*

As far as I can see, your post has changed quite dramatically since I posted this. Before, your post was a mess of colors and everything I said in my post was true and an attempt at streamlining your thread. If you decided to read past the top of my signature, you would see "I provide constructive criticism in a very direct way, I'm not criticising you, your service or your server, I'm just suggesting how you could improve it.".

Anyway, I described what I meant by previous work was to write about your previous work and put a small description about instances of it, as this generally means a server owner looking at using your services can see what you were doing at the server at any given time, what sort of timeframe you worked at said server for, so that questions like Ac3dUd3's are instantly answered, and concerns raised by the rainbow colouring and giant list of server experience are abolished.

Your point about me being the only one giving constructive criticism about your services and thread is pretty easily destroyed, when you consider there have only been ten posts before me, and most of them are just conversation about certain aspects of your job, and an invitation to apply, with one person even neglecting to read the thread *I wonder why -_-*.

You know, writing "I'm surprised. I also love how you put" is not actually a valid point, why (when you have obviously neglected to read the rest of the signature) do you love this, do you find it humoring that I try to do my part helping members of the community by commenting on their services and threads and making suggestions to improve them? Is it funny that you are on such a cloud of blatant arrogance that you cannot even accept small criticisms from another person? because I find this rather amusing.

Auhy said:
Just acknowledge the fact that I'm trying to be nice and do this for free, people with staffing experiences like mine usually charge.

Let me just preface this by saying, I never even commented on your experience (or how good you seem to think you are), I just commented on what I would change in your thread from a purely content and looks perspective.

But since you seem to find yourself so amazing, consider this, would any decent server owner really want a child who can't take any criticism or suggestions, who considers himself such a god that he can use any plugin and is "Extremely well at commands" and who is so damn stuck in his own god complex that he takes people's suggestions then bashes them in the process, trying to prove he is better them than in some vexatious game of dominance. Instead of picking someone who is to lazy to even write a little bit about his job experiences, someone who would not even provide a picture or evidence of his server positions but rather writes "if needed, I can provide proof", maybe server owners should just hire a hacker outright to avoid the pain of trying to handle an asshole with ridiculously inflated views of himself.

None of the qualities any decent server owner would want are presented by you. And from this it's obvious why you have so much experience, every server you join turns you away minutes after acceptance, not appreciative of your rather pretentious views.

Deflate · Mar 23, 2016

CaptainJohn said:
*Sigh*

As far as I can see, your post has changed quite dramatically since I posted this. Before, your post was a mess of colors and everything I said in my post was true and an attempt at streamlining your thread. If you decided to read past the top of my signature, you would see "I provide constructive criticism in a very direct way, I'm not criticising you, your service or your server, I'm just suggesting how you could improve it.".

Anyway, I described what I meant by previous work was to write about your previous work and put a small description about instances of it, as this generally means a server owner looking at using your services can see what you were doing at the server at any given time, what sort of timeframe you worked at said server for, so that questions like Ac3dUd3's are instantly answered, and concerns raised by the rainbow colouring and giant list of server experience are abolished.

Your point about me being the only one giving constructive criticism about your services and thread is pretty easily destroyed, when you consider there have only been ten posts before me, and most of them are just conversation about certain aspects of your job, and an invitation to apply, with one person even neglecting to read the thread *I wonder why -_-*.

You know, writing "I'm surprised. I also love how you put" is not actually a valid point, why (when you have obviously neglected to read the rest of the signature) do you love this, do you find it humoring that I try to do my part helping members of the community by commenting on their services and threads and making suggestions to improve them? Is it funny that you are on such a cloud of blatant arrogance that you cannot even accept small criticisms from another person? because I find this rather amusing.

Let me just preface this by saying, I never even commented on your experience (or how good you seem to think you are), I just commented on what I would change in your thread from a purely content and looks perspective.

But since you seem to find yourself so amazing, consider this, would any decent server owner really want a child who can't take any criticism or suggestions, who considers himself such a god that he can use any plugin and is "Extremely well at commands" and who is so damn stuck in his own god complex that he takes people's suggestions then bashes them in the process, trying to prove he is better them than in some vexatious game of dominance. Instead of picking someone who is to lazy to even write a little bit about his job experiences, someone who would not even provide a picture or evidence of his server positions but rather writes "if needed, I can provide proof", maybe server owners should just hire a hacker outright to avoid the pain of trying to handle an asshole with ridiculously inflated views of himself.

None of the qualities any decent server owner would want are presented by you. And from this it's obvious why you have so much experience, every server you join turns you away minutes after acceptance, not appreciative of your rather pretentious views.

You seriously need to chill out with the cuss words. I took some of your advice from the post you made, but I didn't want to do the rest.

"None of the qualities any decent server owner would want are presented by you. And from this it's obvious why you have so much experience, every server you join turns you away minutes after acceptance, not appreciative of your rather pretentious views."

Servers turning me away? Minutes upon acceptance? Now you're just trashing. None of your advice is "constructive." Especially the story you wrote to me. I didn't even bother to read it all because I knew how foolish it was. If you actually read my thread carefully, I say how much time and dedication I put to servers. I only get demoted on your average low-key 1 player Factions server with 10 plugins, also with an 11 year old owner. Also, if you even bothered to read my post above answering the guys questions, the server I had put in the list and the other servers I cannot remember the names of either are shut down or I resigned from them.

Oh, and here's your proof you were WHINING about the whole time about me being a staff on Mineplex.

https://gyazo.com/89c1915c74dde5b01bbadce631a3c067
You can see me muting someone in the chat, also me talking with my tag.

http://mineplex.com/profile/10703425
You can see people congratulating me on the day I got accepted.

Happy now? Now, get off my thread and stop cussing at me. Goodbye and have a nice day young man.

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