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[Tommy W]

anyone like my edit?

 

[Akiko]

Hello,

In my personal opinion I think the music didn't fit the PVP, I also think that you cut the video at the wrong times and should have just shown the pure action of the fight. At the end with the black screen you left it there for a while which is pretty uselses unless extending the video to 10 Minutes. Apart from that it was pretty good.

 

[Tommy W]

Hello,

In my personal opinion I think the music didn't fit the PVP, I also think that you cut the video at the wrong times and should have just shown the pure action of the fight. At the end with the black screen you left it there for a while which is pretty uselses unless extending the video to 10 Minutes. Apart from that it was pretty good.

10 minutes?[DOUBLEPOST=1569600089][/DOUBLEPOST]o
i read it wrong

 

[Tommy W]

Not too bad. Chill, laid back music.
Only things I'd say to fix would be your renders so that its in a better quality and also that 1 minute of just saying subscribe and like the video.
Other than that, not too shabby

ok, ty.
the end bit, yea, idek.

i was also messing with my obs for a while, so that explains the quality.