[VOUCH Copy]First time Doing a trailer, requesting Feedback :)

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Hey Guys, So I tried my FIRST time doing a server trailer, and yes I know it isnt as good as most of you who do trailers very often, but i mean it is my first go. Provided it is my first time, how do you rate it out of 10? also constructive critism is welcome! (please dont bash my thread)



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Also I'm going to be doing a Vouch copy if anybody wants one, yes I know its not great but better than nothing?

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StrafeZ said:
Hey Guys, So I tried my FIRST time doing a server trailer, and yes I know it isnt as good as most of you who do trailers very often, but i mean it is my first go. Provided it is my first time, how do you rate it out of 10? also constructive critism is welcome! (please dont bash my thread)



(Also feel free to subscribe :) )

Also I'm going to be doing a Vouch copy if anybody wants one, yes I know its not great but better than nothing?

Thanks, StrafeZ
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I really like it.


edits that I would make to that trailer:

Make text bigger and not white, maybe black and bolded.
at the end of each section, the crama stoped, like there wasn't smooth transitions.

besides that, I really liked it and loved the music.


May I ask what the music was called, and can I have a link?

Best of luck!
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My opinion is that:
Font is bad
You can't see the text because of the shaders
That fail on the blackbars
Clips are laggy don't use CameraStudio
 
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JustMPG said:
what is that black bar at the left side
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memefuly said:
It's probably just a recording mess up, but it's triggering me. Haha
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Yeah my bad, it was 2:30 in the morning when i rendered it, half asleep xD Sorry :p
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I really like it.


edits that I would make to that trailer:

Make text bigger and not white, maybe black and bolded.
at the end of each section, the crama stoped, like there wasn't smooth transitions.

besides that, I really liked it and loved the music.


May I ask what the music was called, and can I have a link?

Best of luck!
- JDJZ
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Thanks alot! I felt that i should of changed the text, but my windows media player aint working so I had to guess if all was good! The music was Archangel-Two steps from Hell
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My opinion is that:
Font is bad
You can't see the text because of the shaders
That fail on the blackbars
Clips are laggy don't use CameraStudio
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Do you know any other software that i could substitute for Camerastudio? Thanks :)
 
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StrafeZ said:
Yeah my bad, it was 2:30 in the morning when i rendered it, half asleep xD Sorry :p

Thanks alot! I felt that i should of changed the text, but my windows media player aint working so I had to guess if all was good! The music was Archangel-Two steps from Hell

Do you know any other software that i could substitute for Camerastudio? Thanks :)
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WAIT WHAT??? WINDOWS MEDIA PLAYER OMFG
 
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