what do u think of my first ux /ui design ?

[FelixDev]

What u think, this is only a homepage ?

 

[Tom Croft]

Can you upload it in higher res, this is 284x466 so can't see much :/

 

[FelixDev]

Can you upload it in higher res, this is 284x466 so can't see much :/

So fixed.

 

[Tom Croft]

Thanks for the fix, for a first attempt this is really good What I think you could improve on (from a web developers stand point) is trying to use a variety of font weights. I would also recommend losing the glow effect on those horizontal rules.

One thing that I feel could look nice with this is a brighter color scheme. Try using a white background instead of gray and then use some light shadows, almost like material design.

 

[FelixDev]

Thanks for the fix, for a first attempt this is really good What I think you could improve on (from a web developers stand point) is trying to use a variety of font weights. I would also recommend losing the glow effect on those horizontal rules.

One thing that I feel could look nice with this is a brighter color scheme. Try using a white background instead of gray and then use some light shadows, almost like material design.

Thanks for your feedback and your correct with the glow on the rules, but the font isnt it just nice to be all the same ? But otherwise thanks for your feedback

 

[FelixDev]

i think that i would like to buy one

Lol really ?

 

[FelixDev]

yes sir

L00ting#8928 add me

 

[FelixDev]

The only things I think you should change is the color of the first line under "Learn more," it has a bit of a yellow tint that doesn't match the rest of the image. The communication icons are also a bit blurry, but other than that it looks great!

the icons are just examples but thanks I get your point, I will take a look at the lines [DOUBLEPOST=1542465199][/DOUBLEPOST]ZDesigns what u think?

 

[ZDesigns]

Dont like the font choice, fix proportions and spacing, about us should be on top, have boxes for contact. The design is supposed to be something your eyes follow from top to bottom, so you should strategically place each section.

 

[FelixDev]

Dont like the font choice, fix proportions and spacing, about us should be on top, have boxes for contact. The design is supposed to be something your eyes follow from top to bottom, so you should strategically place each section.

I get you, and I really appreciate your feedback, but this was my website ux / ui design. I do think of starting theard design but ye understand you. Thanks for your feedback means alot

 

[rome.]

Dont like the glow on the stripes
Move the navi down a bit
And also move the text and image of the features down a bit

 

[FelixDev]

Dont like the glow on the stripes
Move the navi down a bit
And also move the text and image of the features down a bit

Thanks for your feedback appreciate it

 

[Mantas from MNTS]

It really does need work, it looks basic, somehow "drowned" because of the poor color choice, and the layout is both basic and unpleasing to look at. I wouldn't pay money for this.

 

[FelixDev]

looks pretty clean, except for the lines being blurred, kinda looks off for me. It would be better if its just a plain line

Understand, Changed it .[DOUBLEPOST=1542542672][/DOUBLEPOST]

It really does need work, it looks basic, somehow "drowned" because of the poor color choice, and the layout is both basic and unpleasing to look at. I wouldn't pay money for this.

Where did I state that I was selling anything loool, its just a process of me learning how to do some ui / ux design.
But your opinion does of course matter and could you be more specific how you want it to look and what I could change. I appreciate all feedback

 

[ZHAG]

Try to use some columns and try to improve the spacing.