What do you think looks like?

[mojomi group]

Hello,
How do you think the subject design of my next generation Survival plugin package I will share soon?
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[User]

Hello,
How do you think the subject design of my next generation Survival plugin package I will share soon?
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My Accounts
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Discord - mojomi#1651​

To begin with, move the "single world?" up a bit; it's overlapping with the red line, which doesn't look very nice at all. Add a vignette to your bottom picture, and retake the first and second picture with shaders. Lastly, I'd suggest you change the font; it looks very blocky and the letter spacing is way too far in between.

 

[babaooo]

To begin with, move the "single world?" up a bit; it's overlapping with the red line, which doesn't look very nice at all. Add a vignette to your bottom picture, and retake the first and second picture with shaders. Lastly, I'd suggest you change the font; it looks very blocky and the letter spacing is way too far in between.

no offense user but imo the text used and the underline to 'single world' is actually quite nice as it emphasises how they offer different worlds. but ofcourse we both have different tastes and i respect that. however i agree with the extra vignette needed to the picture.

 

[User]

no offense user but imo the text used and the underline to 'single world' is actually quite nice as it emphasises how they offer different worlds. but ofcourse we both have different tastes and i respect that. however i agree with the extra vignette needed to the picture.

Having the underline is good, but I don't like it overlapping. Just move the underline to be actually under the word, not overlapping. As for the text, I suppose that's a matter of personal opinion.