What do you think of my first rap?

[BigDealRahil]

My first rap, what do you think?
(Lyrics all made by me, beat found online. let me know if you have any buisness inquirees.)

 

[adamawesome135]

10/10 dude

 

[Lag]

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[BigDealRahil]

10/10 dude

Thanks![DOUBLEPOST=1550185051][/DOUBLEPOST]

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Gang gang!

 

[BigDealRahil]

i would fuck the shit out of you real shit

Sounds like a threat.

 

[Blood]

lyrics are absolutely ingenious

 

[Joey]

mix isn't good

 

[BigDealRahil]

mix isn't good

Wdym?[DOUBLEPOST=1550186767][/DOUBLEPOST]

h0t

Ty good sir

 

[Violet]

Scratchin your balls? Nice 12 year old!

 

[BigDealRahil]

lyrics are absolutely ingenious

Thanks [DOUBLEPOST=1550186791][/DOUBLEPOST]

Ur pfp makes Sense because u look indian

thanks?[DOUBLEPOST=1550186806][/DOUBLEPOST]

Scratchin your balls? Nice 12 year old!

13 uwu

 

[Brandon]

Sounds like a Minecraft diss track, but I dig it.
Pun intended.

 

[BigDealRahil]

Sounds like a Minecraft diss track, but I dig it.
Pun intended.

Lmao, nice, thanks for the nice comment!

 

[Jami]

scratchin' my balls till it hurt, ey

 

[BigDealRahil]

scratchin' my balls till it hurt, ey

ayeeeeee

 

[Joey]

Wdym?[DOUBLEPOST=1550186767][/DOUBLEPOST]
Ty good sir

I can't hear you, your feature hurts my ears but I can't hear him either. The beat is kinda horrible too

 

[BigDealRahil]

I can't hear you, your feature hurts my ears but I can't hear him either. The beat is kinda horrible too

I appreciate your opinion, i'll try and improve[DOUBLEPOST=1550188847][/DOUBLEPOST]The more review the better![DOUBLEPOST=1550190156][/DOUBLEPOST]Let me know!

 

[BigDealRahil]

Pls let me know what you think?