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the site takes a while to load, might want to fix that
there's a lot wrong with this, i couldn't list it all so i just fixed it for you
go to your html file, delete everything (back up if you want), and copy everything from the spoiler into the html
there's a lot wrong with this, i couldn't list it all so i just fixed it for you
go to your html file, delete everything (back up if you want), and copy everything from the spoiler into the html
<!DOCTYPE html>
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<meta charset="UTF-8">
<meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0">
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<title>Felix B | Developer</title>
<link rel="stylesheet" href="main.css">
<link rel="shortcut icon" href="favicon (1).ico" type="image/x-icon">
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<img src="Head_cutout.png" style="width: 15%;" alt="" class="logo">
<h1 class="name">Felix B | Introduction</h1>
<p class="intro">Hello! My name is <span class="boldspan">Felix</span>, and I am 16 years old. I currently reside in <span class="boldspan">Sweden</span>. I'm in the process of studying to become a full-time <span class="boldspan">Web-Developer</span> in a high school in Gothenburg. I am offering my services to become <span class="boldspan">financially stable</span> to move out in the future.</p>
<h2 class="learn">Learn more</h2>
<img class="arrow" src="http://elevarbetensys.se/SY18/BF18/Personal/downwards-arrow-key.png" alt="">
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<h1>Experience</h1>
<p>I am experienced with HTML, CSS, C#, and JavaScript. I am also learning PHP & NodeJS. Currently, I am deciding which one to use for backend development. I have created and run a multitude of websites. Currently, I am just a frontend developer focusing on design, but I plan to be a fullstack developer in the future.</p>
<img class="money" src="checklist-150938_1280.png" alt="">
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<div class="right">
<img class="language" src="mobile-devices-2017978_1280.png" alt="">
<h1>Prices</h1>
<p>My prices vary depending on the site you want to order. Costs start at £200, which is quite low compared to the average cost of a fully custom website. However, more intricate and detailed sites may cost up to £1000 - £2000.</p>
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<h1 class="part-text">Contact</h1>
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<h1>Discord</h1>
<p>L00ting#6443</p>
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<h1>Email</h1>
<p>[email protected]</p>
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<html lang="en">
<head>
<meta charset="UTF-8">
<meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0">
<meta http-equiv="X-UA-Compatible" content="ie=edge">
<title>Felix B | Developer</title>
<link rel="stylesheet" href="main.css">
<link rel="shortcut icon" href="favicon (1).ico" type="image/x-icon">
</head>
<body>
<div class="top">
<img src="Head_cutout.png" style="width: 15%;" alt="" class="logo">
<h1 class="name">Felix B | Introduction</h1>
<p class="intro">Hello! My name is <span class="boldspan">Felix</span>, and I am 16 years old. I currently reside in <span class="boldspan">Sweden</span>. I'm in the process of studying to become a full-time <span class="boldspan">Web-Developer</span> in a high school in Gothenburg. I am offering my services to become <span class="boldspan">financially stable</span> to move out in the future.</p>
<h2 class="learn">Learn more</h2>
<img class="arrow" src="http://elevarbetensys.se/SY18/BF18/Personal/downwards-arrow-key.png" alt="">
</div>
<div class="middle">
<div class="left">
<h1>Experience</h1>
<p>I am experienced with HTML, CSS, C#, and JavaScript. I am also learning PHP & NodeJS. Currently, I am deciding which one to use for backend development. I have created and run a multitude of websites. Currently, I am just a frontend developer focusing on design, but I plan to be a fullstack developer in the future.</p>
<img class="money" src="checklist-150938_1280.png" alt="">
</div>
<div class="right">
<img class="language" src="mobile-devices-2017978_1280.png" alt="">
<h1>Prices</h1>
<p>My prices vary depending on the site you want to order. Costs start at £200, which is quite low compared to the average cost of a fully custom website. However, more intricate and detailed sites may cost up to £1000 - £2000.</p>
</div>
</div>
<div class="bottom">
<h1 class="part-text">Contact</h1>
<div class="container">
<div class="box1">
<h1>Discord</h1>
<p>L00ting#6443</p>
</div>
<div class="box2">
<h1>Email</h1>
<p>[email protected]</p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
<script src="https://ajax.googleapis.com/ajax/libs/jquery/3.3.1/jquery.min.js"></script>
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Thanks for your feedback, might consider adding that then
True true[DOUBLEPOST=1550506882][/DOUBLEPOST]Yeah cuz if you're doing prices like that your not aiming for minecraft websites but for actual companies therefore they likely wont be using Discord or mcm
List the things, I want to hear
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Hmm is that really necessary ?
okay well you misordered your codes, your signs are messed up, you type in broken and unprofessional english, you forget to add some parts, you make some parts unnecessarily lengthy, etcTrue true[DOUBLEPOST=1550506882][/DOUBLEPOST]
List the things, I want to hear
Hmm is that really necessary ?
just use what's in the spoiler, do a side-by-side comparison on your desktop if you want
Hahaha okey, Will fix later on then! Thanks[DOUBLEPOST=1550507023][/DOUBLEPOST]
Okey, thanks. might do in the future.
But what exactly do you mean by this ?
you type in broken and unprofessional english
"I am offering my services to get a stable economy to move out in the future." makes no sense
you start sentences like "Currently deciding" which you shouldn't ("I am currently deciding" is how you should do it)
"£ 200" is not the right way to put money symbols
you capitalize words mid-sentence
you used too instead of to
Okey thanks for all your feedback. Will change it up. Thanks
npOkey thanks for all your feedback. Will change it up. Thanks
though seriously i already fixed all that in what i sent you in the spoiler, all you have to do to fix literally every visible problem is replace your current code with the edited one
your choice though :shrug:
The site is boring to look at. No background and nothing which makes it unique. There is nothing which would be remembered.
Remember, you are trying to sell yourself there, you are trying to get a client to work with you because THEY thought about you after visiting your and other websites.
I wouldn't be that harsh if anyone is a beginner and offering their sites for 10 USD or anything close to that but you are trying to sell websites for more than 1000 pounds without any kind of portfolio and with a website which doesn't show skills.
Remember, you are trying to sell yourself there, you are trying to get a client to work with you because THEY thought about you after visiting your and other websites.
I wouldn't be that harsh if anyone is a beginner and offering their sites for 10 USD or anything close to that but you are trying to sell websites for more than 1000 pounds without any kind of portfolio and with a website which doesn't show skills.
As I stated above "Making a portfolio and it will soon come up" smthing like that, and I dont want to make smthing that sticks out to much I just want to make it clean and easy you know.[DOUBLEPOST=1550508924][/DOUBLEPOST]
Ye I don't want to copy code tho, I want to learn by my own mistakes but thanks for pointing all out!
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I'm on mobile so I'll keep it short and sweet: it's bland, boring, and the layout needs serious work. The website has no flow to it and looks like the result of 20 minutes into a random Code pen project.
Want more details? Reply and once I'm on my laptop if give you more pointers and advice.
Want more details? Reply and once I'm on my laptop if give you more pointers and advice.
I agree with Shaun
For pricing 200 euros, I'd expect something greater in the site. It's just bland. People do want to see something clean but also skillful. This doesn't express any skills in my opinion. Embedded style sheets is bad. Your actual site choose code is something like 50 lines but with the embedded style, you're breaking 6000 lines. This makes your code VERY ugly. 95% of the style rules aren't even used. And seem to be generated code classes. Possible copy-paste situation to me? I suggest removing the embedded style as it's unnecessary and just taking up load time. Other than that, your site is just unamusing. It took me awhile to even describe what I saw and I'm still having trouble. Again, people want to see clean and skillful. To me this is just "kiddy". Sure I'm a minecraft cake saying something is kiddy but you're going for professional style and hopefully as your job while I'm keeping this as a hobby. Take a look around on dribble and see how those designers create their look.
For pricing 200 euros, I'd expect something greater in the site. It's just bland. People do want to see something clean but also skillful. This doesn't express any skills in my opinion. Embedded style sheets is bad. Your actual site choose code is something like 50 lines but with the embedded style, you're breaking 6000 lines. This makes your code VERY ugly. 95% of the style rules aren't even used. And seem to be generated code classes. Possible copy-paste situation to me? I suggest removing the embedded style as it's unnecessary and just taking up load time. Other than that, your site is just unamusing. It took me awhile to even describe what I saw and I'm still having trouble. Again, people want to see clean and skillful. To me this is just "kiddy". Sure I'm a minecraft cake saying something is kiddy but you're going for professional style and hopefully as your job while I'm keeping this as a hobby. Take a look around on dribble and see how those designers create their look.
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