Would you buy this Portal Page?

[ThePhantomDev]

So, I need critic:

For the past week, I have been designing a Portal Page (Front end only), and I need advice, I need to know if you all would buy this, if you needed it, and you had the money of course. This is all metaphorical and I purely need this advice to know what to add/change, and of course the price I should charge for it when its done.

The info I need is this:

Would you buy it:
How much would you buy it for:
Any critic you can offer:

I am only showing you the top and bottom of the page as the main content part is just blank. If you want to see the page itself, then go to https://thezuccpremium.000webhostapp.com/ (I know you all wont trust the link, so I provided pictures, another thing to keep in mind that formatting isnt finished yet, so the pictures are what you should be looking at).

Some notes to keep:

-Not fully formatted, website may/may not display on all devices right
-I do intend on exclusively selling it
-I will keep this thread updated as I continue to update the theme
-The current version of the theme is not uploaded to the webhost, but this version is close enough
-Anybody who is not respectful will be ignored

 

[Seatbelts]

So, I need critic:

For the past week, I have been designing a Portal Page (Front end only), and I need advice, I need to know if you all would buy this, if you needed it, and you had the money of course. This is all metaphorical and I purely need this advice to know what to add/change, and of course the price I should charge for it when its done.

The info I need is this:

Would you buy it:
How much would you buy it for:
Any critic you can offer:

I am only showing you the top and bottom of the page as the main content part is just blank. If you want to see the page itself, then go to https://thezuccpremium.000webhostapp.com/ (I know you all wont trust the link, so I provided pictures, another thing to keep in mind that formatting isnt finished yet, so the pictures are what you should be looking at).

Some notes to keep:

-Not fully formatted, website may/may not display on all devices right
-I do intend on exclusively selling it
-I will keep this thread updated as I continue to update the theme
-The current version of the theme is not uploaded to the webhost, but this version is close enough
-Anybody who is not respectful will be ignored

It looks decent, but the fact that it isn't formatted for all devices and resolutions would make me back out.

 

[ThePhantomDev]

It looks decent, but the fact that it isn't formatted for all devices and resolutions would make me back out.

Yea, im going to get on to that pretty soon, its just sort of my flow:

1.Design page
2.Code cleanup
3.Formatting

 

[Zyger]

You need to bring the ip div closer to the middle

 

[ThePhantomDev]

Thanks for the critic, keep it coming!

 

[ThePhantomDev]

Or dont...

 

[mb1552]

Input:
Sizing of IP should be increased. Website hyperlink should be removed (you're already there so..)
The Servername Should have a cooler font/effect. Looks really plain right now.

Blue BK White Text Yellow hover looks a little rough, probably not the color scheme I would use. I don't want to recommened one to you because that's your creative liberty, but there are good color scheme templates out there.

Someone mentioned no movement on hover, that's right it makes it very unstable looking

Add a transition ease out to the hovers to make it smoother

The footer is very cluttered. Footer text should not be that long. Too many footer links. I would limit to 8 tops.

Footer icons are inconsistent. At least: make it one shape. If not one shape and one color that changes to native color on hover. FA Icons or any icon pack are your friends on those.

General padding issues around the website, a lot of elements are too close together for comfort.

Your workflow of "cleaning up the code or formatting" after page design, and adapting for different resolutions LATER is a mistake. It's very hard to work backwards. What will end up happening is you will spend more time fixing elements to be responsive instead of just trying to do it the first time. It will be pretty frustrating, and might not even work the more complex your website gets. Imagine making a full website (15 pages or something), and then having to go in and change basic responsive elements.

Personally recommendations to help alleviate the stress of responsive web development would be Bootstrap. It's controversial but could save you hours of work.

If you have any questions:

Discord: Exit#9063

 

[ThePhantomDev]

Input:
Sizing of IP should be increased. Website hyperlink should be removed (you're already there so..)
The Servername Should have a cooler font/effect. Looks really plain right now.

Blue BK White Text Yellow hover looks a little rough, probably not the color scheme I would use. I don't want to recommened one to you because that's your creative liberty, but there are good color scheme templates out there.

Someone mentioned no movement on hover, that's right it makes it very unstable looking

Add a transition ease out to the hovers to make it smoother

The footer is very cluttered. Footer text should not be that long. Too many footer links. I would limit to 8 tops.

Footer icons are inconsistent. At least: make it one shape. If not one shape and one color that changes to native color on hover. FA Icons or any icon pack are your friends on those.

General padding issues around the website, a lot of elements are too close together for comfort.

Your workflow of "cleaning up the code or formatting" after page design, and adapting for different resolutions LATER is a mistake. It's very hard to work backwards. What will end up happening is you will spend more time fixing elements to be responsive instead of just trying to do it the first time. It will be pretty frustrating, and might not even work the more complex your website gets. Imagine making a full website (15 pages or something), and then having to go in and change basic responsive elements.

Personally recommendations to help alleviate the stress of responsive web development would be Bootstrap. It's controversial but could save you hours of work.

If you have any questions:

Discord: Exit#9063

Thanks, ill take everything that you said into consideration, I always like hearing other peoples input

 

[tupley]

yes it's good