Feedback on Cinematic/Build

[DiabloTurtle]

Hey y'all, this is our first YouTube post in a while so I'd like some feedback on the build, cinematic, and overall execution of the project.
Thanks a bunch

 

[JamboIE]

Looks amazing, I love the rain in the cinematic. Nice detail

 

[MrAniman2]

Personally I don't think such fast camera movement presents the build very well... especially around 0:48. But it's just a personal preference. Judging from the render build looks nice.

 

[DiabloTurtle]

Looks amazing, I love the rain in the cinematic. Nice detail

Thank you!

Personally I don't think such fast camera movement presents the build very well... especially around 0:48. But it's just a personal preference. Judging from the render build looks nice.

Yeah, personally I don't like all of the twisty movements and I asked the cinematographer to do more of a solemn/slow feeling, but he didn't capture it as much as I would have liked him to.

 

[jaykk]

That's pretty good. I would try to avoid tilting the camera more than 45 degrees and I think it should be better synced with the music.

 

[Terminator]

Good job!