Feedback on my first drawn logo

[CelestialSatyr]

Hey!
First of all, thank you for checking out this thread.
So, I got my drawing tablet a couple days ago, and I decided to start drawing digitally, because I've been drawing on pen and paper since I was 5 or so.

This is my first logo that I've made, It's not the best, I'll be honest.
Note: MurlocMC is not a real server! But if you are looking for a new name for a new server, well, here you go you can buy the logo if you'd like.
Please leave some feedback below, and constructive critisism!
Thank you

Spoiler: Logo

 

[Chearful]

Very nice!

 

[Destruct]

Terrible.

Spoiler

JUST JOKING, CAN'T YOU TAKE A JOKE ?
It is very good!

 

[Primal Power]

It is good for your first one. Keep on progressing!

 

[CelestialSatyr]

Very nice!

Terrible.

Spoiler

JUST JOKING, CAN'T YOU TAKE A JOKE ?
It is very good!

It is good for your first one. Keep on progressing!

Thank you I will definitly keep on making more art

 

[Gunny]

Holly balls. They look so creepy and it looks so good! Keep this up man, you could so make a killing selling this stuff.

 

[CelestialSatyr]

Holly balls. They look so creepy and it looks so good! Keep this up man, you could so make a killing selling this stuff.

Just for information: They're called Murlocs, they're from the game "World of Warcraft" (Massive Blizzard fan right here )
And "you could so make a killing selling this stuff", hmm, I'm not sure, I mean, I doubt it's worth more then $10?

 

[keilyn]

Its good for your first one . You can improve it using the pressure of the tablet. uses more defined lines

 

[moon10k]

how dafuk u do dat, i tri wit mah drwin tblet butz a suk and me parnts furced me 2 returnz it ;c

 

[Paradise]

Use Shading lines are a bit funky

 

[Gunny]

how dafuk u do dat, i tri wit mah drwin tblet butz a suk and me parnts furced me 2 returnz it ;c

Dude, this isn't even funny. Why would you try and post acting like a little kid?

 

[CelestialSatyr]

Chest is.. average.. otherwise it's good.

Yes, I know, It was an experiment with using different layers and changing the opacity

 

[CelestialSatyr]

Thank you