feedback on this trailer again again again reeeeee
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There is not much wrong with this trailer.
You already improved by a metric ton so props to you. Now all that is left is experimenting with being creative.
- Unique intro, nice.
- Logo introduction is exactly the right amount of time.
- Most shots make sense with the text.
- You might want to slow down the dropping of the individual letters of the text a bit. Although, I am not sure how that would look.
- The not being in the middle of the screen when you are showing of anything is a pro.
You can then read the text clearly because of the background and you can actually see what is happening on screen as it is not cluttered with letters! Win-win. - At 1:08 you miss a beat though if you play the video back slowly you notice it.
- The ending is well synced with the song.
You already improved by a metric ton so props to you. Now all that is left is experimenting with being creative.
Bruh what the hell. I also used the same song for an edit today lmao, also can you give me feedbacks too instead of me giving you feedback?[DOUBLEPOST=1546446220][/DOUBLEPOST]
I'll give it a 4/10, 1:04 ruined the experience, you can learn from my edit at approx 0:12
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Let me roast your trailer too instead of always roasting his.
I always love an outro of 14 seconds. That's half the damn trailer. (3 second intro).
An intro that is just flat text on a static black background. Not very inspiring.
The outro is very basic.
I dislike the complete black backgrounds even though you try to sync the scenes with the song. As it no text shows it is somewhat useless.
The shaders are way too orange.
What is up with the random lines in the screen?
I also cannot grasp what he can learn from you.
It was too sharp considering that the trailer tried to maintain some sort of a flow, you just moved from shot to shot too quickly with no blures,zooms, ramps, transitions or anything, it was just unpleasent to look at[DOUBLEPOST=1546473256][/DOUBLEPOST]
Also, the reason for the 4/10 is that half of this market didn't pass the 5/10 scale considering that 10/10 means Woodzy, I myself am somewhere between 3-5/10 , people just throw 9.5/10 out of nowhere, I mean look at my appraisals, people said my trailers are worth 700$ out of nowhere.
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I see your reasoning, but I'm not trying to compare myself to Woodzy. I'm just looking for some ratings and constructive criticism. I moved from shot to shot to match the beats of the song. And what do you mean no 'blures, zooms, ramps,'. What would you want me to add to the trailer?[DOUBLEPOST=1546474078][/DOUBLEPOST]
Almost forgot, here's my feedback.
- There's no RSMB, Add that, it'll make it look better.
- The cut to black for almost every clip looks a bit ugly.
- The shake at every beat also looks ugly, you're using it too much.
- The flickering at the end of the trailer doesn't really match the beats.
- The trailer looks too orangish.
If we're comparing on a 'Woodzy' level, I'd give you a 1.5-2/10.
If we're comparing on a normal level, I'd giving you a 5-6/10.
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It does have RSMB, I couldn't make it much stronger.
Just like the previous guy, this is the no text version, imagine if there was a text transitions fitting inside every single black screen
I do agree that I messed up the shake, should've made stronger beats stronger but shorter and make the decay shorter on single beats.
Flickering was out of laziness, I admit it. but so is yours, it messes up some of the timing.
It is orange because idk, I liked this color correction, my second time trying it out.[DOUBLEPOST=1546511425][/DOUBLEPOST]
The last scene is too sharp, should've added some tiny zoom transitions to add flow, there are plenty of pancropping tutorials and etc, it is unpleasent to look at, the way the shots instantly change[DOUBLEPOST=1546511906][/DOUBLEPOST]
Also, final tip, I want you to re-watch my teaser, it's my first time trying to tell a story through a trailer rather than playing boring shots with fancy edits. I made a short story of some guy spawning in the gorgeous arena, fights until he gets to the deathmatch , and then it shows a shot that shows us who are the survivors teasing us to the final fight, if you're planning to go "high end trailer making" I'd suggest you to look into that.
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You really cannot take critique can you? Your attitude is awful. Anyways, I've no reason to argue with you as I rather not waste my time.
Proving there is a colour difference:
I looked through your trailers and anyone saying that they are worth above $20 - $30 is out of his mind.
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lol.[DOUBLEPOST=1546515877][/DOUBLEPOST]
Alright nvm... just turned up my brightness, you're right lmao, the brightness overlay is .. yeah wow I really messed that one up, if you got more feedback you can post it on my thread[DOUBLEPOST=1546516064][/DOUBLEPOST]
Also that's my point, people can't appraise here properly.[DOUBLEPOST=1546517737][/DOUBLEPOST]
Also for here, he can learn from the flow, I used proper remaps and shakes but did not maximize the use of the beats as it is way too much.
Well, lesson learnt, don't respond to criticism at 3am and turn up the brightness
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I think my flow is quite decent, Ya know, like all the trailers. Fast, Slow, then fast again. I don't see how you used 'proper remaps'? It looks quite similar to mine, but mine just gets bit more faster near the start and end, which imo looks pretty good. And I'm sorry, I see no story what so ever. All I see, is what I see in every trailer, shots of builds with maybe a few people. I'm not trying to go over the top with my trailers, I'm adding a few effects here and there and experimenting, but I don't really plan to move my trailer style to something like XDCAM's.
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