feedback on this trailer again again again reeeeee

[moon10k]

Asking for feedback, again. Think I did pretty decent on this one, not too bad. Give it a rating from 1-10 and any constructive criticism if possible. I do charge for these trailers, so pm me if you're interested. tanks u.



Aekalix

 

[Ilay A]

I think my flow is quite decent, Ya know, like all the trailers. Fast, Slow, then fast again. I don't see how you used 'proper remaps'? It looks quite similar to mine, but mine just gets bit more faster near the start and end, which imo looks pretty good. And I'm sorry, I see no story what so ever. All I see, is what I see in every trailer, shots of builds with maybe a few people. I'm not trying to go over the top with my trailers, I'm adding a few effects here and there and experimenting, but I don't really plan to move my trailer style to something like XDCAM's.

Well, I didn't make much of a story, but here, there's a good example :
**Opening shot of the lobby**
" Big Majestic maps "
**Shows a guy loot a chest**
"Gear up with our custom weapons"
**Shows 2 guys fighting with some effects**
"Custom enchants"
Then you just tease them towards a dramatic ending, like a fight maybe, I didn't execute it too well since I made it only in 1.5 hours and as you can see, I didn't put a single effect / text screen.

 

[moon10k]

I didn't put a single effect / text screen.

weird flex but ok

 

[Ilay A]

weird flex but ok

It's not a flex, also everyone here seems to get me wrong, I didn't say I was better, I'm just trying to help ._. why ya'all are against me, I know I said something insanely dumb because of the brightness of my screen, but really, I'm trying to help.

 

[moon10k]

It's not a flex, also everyone here seems to get me wrong, I didn't say I was better, I'm just trying to help ._. why ya'all are against me, I know I said something insanely dumb because of the brightness of my screen, but really, I'm trying to help.

Ehhhh, seems a bit more like criricism than constructive criticism.

 

[Ilay A]

Ehhhh, seems a bit more like criricism than constructive criticism.

I mean, I don't have much to say about your trailer as I myself am around that level, just saying that you should do something to add more flow into quick transitions to not ruin the experience. we can end it here I guess xd.

you can add zoom-ins , cut the beats in half, use shakes, blurs, just let your mind go crazy.

 

[moon10k]

4/10
add some pumps or shake for each beat cuz its kinda boring

that's literally what i did lol

 

[moon10k]

well u cant see it and its bad

I can see it just fine tbh.

 

[Ilay A]

that's literally what i did lol

Honestly, that's the suggestion I gave you, try to add a longer decay to the shake, buy some presets, heck it, even learn how to make your own, sapphire + twitch is simply not enough.

Also, try to come up with creative angles, looking straight at the building and only moving upwards is just distracting and goofy