feedback on trailer?

[moon10k]

Think this is my best tbh. Thoughts? 1-10?

 

[AeroMC]

Looks great!

Think this is my best tbh. Thoughts? 1-10?

 

[Axuk]

Looks really good tbh, good luck!

 

[Nrevi]

Sick

 

[Aekalix]

Think this is my best tbh. Thoughts? 1-10?

It might be just me but I would love to see unique things.

 

[moon10k]

It might be just me but I would love to see unique things.

Gotcha, it's just the quality you get for such a low price.

 

[Aekalix]

Gotcha, it's just the quality you get for such a low price.

Higher quality in regards to uniqueness will give you monopoly over all trailer makers (As they cannot be bothered bending from their presets) and then you will automatically get paid more.

I'm willing to purchase one from you and see how far we can push you to create something truly worthwhile but you would have to wait a month or two.

 

[on]

holy shit, moon10k this is fucking hot. keep up the solid work dude

 

[moon10k]

Higher quality in regards to uniqueness will give you monopoly over all trailer makers (As they cannot be bothered bending from their presets) and then you will automatically get paid more.

I'm willing to purchase one from you and see how far we can push you to create something truly worthwhile but you would have to wait a month or two.

I see. I'm willing to wait. If someone wanted to push me to my limits, and was willing to pay for the amount of time and effort it'd take, I'd def be up for it. Considering I have to deliver my current trailers in 2-4 days and have other things to do, my current prices just wouldn't be worth putting a crap ton of time and effort into a trailer.

 

[moon10k]

yo i was watching it then couple seconds in the first rotate to next scene my screen turned black and i thought it was the trailer

lmao

 

[Pakistan]

That is sick mate, may I ask what video editor do you use? If its Adobe Premier Pro, may I ask for those transitions? It will look great for my YouTube Videos

 

[moon10k]

That is sick mate, may I ask what video editor do you use? If its Adobe Premier Pro, may I ask for those transitions? It will look great for my YouTube Videos

Thanks! I use Adobe After Effects. Sadly, I don't share anything from my Project files, though you can always use the 'Handy Transitions Pack'. It's free if you know where to look

 

[Pakistan]

Thanks! I use Adobe After Effects. Sadly, I don't share anything from my Project files, though you can always use the 'Handy Transitions Pack'. It's free if you know where to look

Thanks mate, I appreciate it!

 

[Aekalix]

I see. I'm willing to wait. If someone wanted to push me to my limits, and was willing to pay for the amount of time and effort it'd take, I'd def be up for it. Considering I have to deliver my current trailers in 2-4 days and have other things to do, my current prices just wouldn't be worth putting a crap ton of time and effort into a trailer.

It's a lame excuse imo. You don't always have to get paid to improve yourself.

Nobody in this thread is giving actual criticism besides trying to stroke your ego or hopefully become more friendly in the community. However, here is some of my points that actual is criticism.

1. The introduction is way too long. Keep it 3 seconds, not 9 seconds.
2. The first few seconds of the alarm actually have nothing to do with what is happening on the screen or what is coming.
3. The flickering of the video can feel ambient, however, in my opinion, it is annoying. It feels like a cheap way of creating ambient.
4. The text is actually a bit hard to read on certain shots.
5. The content on the screen is all the same. It is cinematic shots of a few builds.
6. The outro that starts at 0.47 is way too long.
7. Music does nothing but try and keep you in suspense for the complete trailer which can be effective on younger ones but I see it as a con.
8. Text at the bottom in the outro is vague due to your ambient light effect.

The trailer is cheating its way to generate hype. It is generic, it does not truly stand out from the other trailer makers here.

What you do right is:"
1. For what you are given, the shots are fine and you tried to make the best of it.
2. The beat of the music is mostly timed right although at some points it's overdone or inconsistent.

I know this might seem like a bit much or a lot of will refer to it as hate but I am putting out criticism which is the easiest to give when you notice things going wrong. I do see more potential with you than other trailer makers who just say 'no' when something difficult is requested. If this makes you hate me to such extent that any further business is off the table then that's all right. If not, then I will see you in the upcoming months.

Edit: Changed some things

 

[moon10k]

It's a lame excuse imo. You don't always have to get paid to improve yourself.

Nobody in this thread is giving actual criticism besides trying to stroke your ego or hopefully become more friendly in the community. However, here is some of my points that actual is criticism.

1. The introduction is way too long. Keep it 3 seconds, not 9 seconds.
2. The first few seconds of the alarm actually have nothing to do with what is happening on the screen or what is coming.
3. The flickering of the video can feel ambient, however, in my opinion, it is annoying. It feels like a cheap way of creating ambient.
4. The text is actually a bit hard to read on certain shots.
5. The content on the screen is all the same. It is cinematic shots of a few builds.
6. The outro that starts at 0.47 is way too long.
7. Music does nothing but try and keep you in suspense for the complete trailer which can be effective on younger ones but I see it as a con.
8. Text at the bottom in the outro is vague due to your ambient light effect.

The trailer is cheating a way to gain hype. It is generic, it does not truly stand out from the other trailer makers here.

What you do right is:"
1. For what you are given, the shots are fine and you tried to make the best of it.
2. The beat of the music is mostly timed right although at some points it's overdone or inconsistent.

I know this might seem like a bit much or a lot of will refer to it as hate but I am putting out criticism which is the easiest to give when you notice things going wrong. I do see more potential with you than other trailer makers who just say 'no' when something difficult is requested. If this does not make you hate me to such extent that any further business is off the table then that's all right. If not, then I will see you in the upcoming months.

Woah, Thanks! I appreciate it. I don't take it as hate, I take it as a way for me to learn. I just have a lot on my hands at the moment, but I'll surely try to see what I can do to push myself to my limit. I'm looking forward to doing business with you in the upcoming months.

 

[Hitoo]

hot

 

[MystiqCraft]

My bad or probably just today while surfing this forum from mobile new thread section I have seen MC trailers all done in same pattern though your was second best as of now. Someone above already gave detailed explanation so I won't, I agree first 30 sec beat n transition went haywire. Yet can't disagree making this long video takes time, efforts and precision.

Probably I can expect in future from you to evolve and introduce a new pattern of trailers.

 

[AdamEdits]

it's aight... def need improvement but one of the main things wrong with this is that the movement is too linear