My Best server Trailer!
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Other than Dogs, not sure, the market is pretty empty
But I'll consider changing, not sure if to make that my style, that's why I'm here after all[DOUBLEPOST=1547913397][/DOUBLEPOST]Looking for more opinions, really looking forward to improving my quality this month
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I honestly haven't seen better for less than $25, I know people who made amazing trailers for $25, but they all quit.
To be honest $25 is really fair for this, people who don't make trailers don't know how many hours an editor can spend editing.
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Honestly, I know 3/4 of the entire trailer market through a discord group, send me a PM about this please, will explain why I need that in the PM
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Ah, you drew inspiration from Two Steps From Hell (logo appearance and song).
- The song does not fit your trailer. You pick a song that conveys a story without giving the players a story.
- Less ambient flicker
- Stop moving the camera forward and backwards continuously.
- Some shots are very good (0:32 - 0:36), others not so much. (0:38 to 0:40)
- I dislike the text syncing to the Symballs. It feels a bit odd or awkward. But I am not sure how it is without it.
- At 0:40 it really feels like the trailer is at its end and then still continues, a tad odd.
- All Shots after 0:40 till the outro are great too.
The outro is nice, too much flicker though. Normally I would say the outro is too long but because of the text appearing later, it feels just right.
- The background fits the music but the shots do not.
To make a trailer fit this music it needs to be more cinematic and actually tell a story. The frames shouldn't be interrupted by text or anything like that. It should be a flowing sequence.
But I like that you experimented.
Note: Trailer is fine but still not as creative as I hope them to be, make that happen and then you get my praise.
- The song does not fit your trailer. You pick a song that conveys a story without giving the players a story.
- Less ambient flicker
- Stop moving the camera forward and backwards continuously.
- Some shots are very good (0:32 - 0:36), others not so much. (0:38 to 0:40)
- I dislike the text syncing to the Symballs. It feels a bit odd or awkward. But I am not sure how it is without it.
- At 0:40 it really feels like the trailer is at its end and then still continues, a tad odd.
- All Shots after 0:40 till the outro are great too.
The outro is nice, too much flicker though. Normally I would say the outro is too long but because of the text appearing later, it feels just right.
- The background fits the music but the shots do not.
To make a trailer fit this music it needs to be more cinematic and actually tell a story. The frames shouldn't be interrupted by text or anything like that. It should be a flowing sequence.
But I like that you experimented.
Note: Trailer is fine but still not as creative as I hope them to be, make that happen and then you get my praise.
Thanks for the feedback, I felt lost when making the text screen and I had to make the trailer longer for the request of the client, I agree, the back and forth movements weren't too attractive but I got into a no-go point, thank you for your time, will keep that in mind for next time
Personally I hate these cliche faction/skyblock trailers, but looking at the price you charged, the quality is pretty great. There could be some minor improvements here and there (same as Aekalix posted), but overall it looks alright!
I absolutely agree with Aekalix response, but I want to talk about this part the most. The song beat faded off, perfectly for the logo outro. After the 50sec mark, I lost attention which is what some trailer makers fail to realize. Sure I'm just a cake who does websites but I'm sure someone here can agree that a trailer longer than a minute loses the viewers attention, unless there's something dramatic happening at the point that keeps them engrossed in a video. The calming of the song did not do this for me.
Your typography choice is a bit off. I haven't found a font that exactly matches the logo's text style but this was the closest I found
https://fonts.google.com/specimen/Teko
If someone has a better option, don't hesitate to post it.
Other than that, I like it. I believe you underpriced this but according to others, there's, and I quote, "better ones" out there. I don't pay attention long enough to trailers to notice how one is better than another.
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