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Hey guys,
I just finished working on a 9 rank icon commission, was curious what your thoughts were! Rank it on a 1/10 scale! and please tell me how you think i could have done them better.
Just in case, the rank order goes:

Coal > Iron > Gold > Diamond > Emerald > Redstone > Lapis >Obsidian > Bedrock.

Oh and which one do you like the most? (I'm thinking Obsidian or Lapis)


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I like it a lot -- The obsidian one looks great to be honest.

I've seen your art earlier and I think you're improving by the day, keep it up! :)

I'd rate this a solid 8/10

Thank you very much! I like the Obsidian one as well, that lava was kind of a pain to figure out actually haha
What do you reckon i could do to turn that 8 into a 9 or a 10?
 

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I mean you certainly have a style of your own, which is a good thing. Though I think it can be improved on shading here and there. Kind of hard to explain, but just minor things feel like theyre missing some extra shadow or highlight.
Hmm, good point, my rendering/coloring is my weakest link, been working on it bit by bit :) needs more work though, noted, thanks!
 

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It looks really nice. The only quibble I have is that some of the line work is a little shaky, but other than that the style is really clean.
 

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9/10 looks really nice man !
Thank you!
It looks pretty good! I give it 8/10 just because I don't like dark colors too much but I like your style of drawing, it's really good!
Honestly im not a fan of dark colors myself xD back when i just started art i would say no to any person who had too much black in their skin haha.
It looks really nice. The only quibble I have is that some of the line work is a little shaky, but other than that the style is really clean.
Shaky lines huh, yeah i need to work on that some more, thanks for the advice!
 

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Not a massive fan of the top row. It just doesn't rub me the right way, but considering it's the lower ranks/tiers then I think it's fine.. But as for everything up to the final rank, bloody good job dude!

I think the last rank should maybe have some sort of sword/pickaxe or crown embedded into it, y'know to give it a sense of priority/highness considering it's the final rank :p

Good Job overall though!
 

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they all look really good, bit darker of theme but it's nice. the last rank though seems a bit dull, being the top rank you would think it'd be a bit different than those dark and dull colours, but I guess that's the rank's name isnt it.
Yeah it was hard to make that bedrock one look any cool, cause well just bedrock its very blend, i tried to make it fancier by making it look like a little meteor or whatever but wasnt enough to spice things up sadly xD
Not a massive fan of the top row. It just doesn't rub me the right way, but considering it's the lower ranks/tiers then I think it's fine.. But as for everything up to the final rank, bloody good job dude!

I think the last rank should maybe have some sort of sword/pickaxe or crown embedded into it, y'know to give it a sense of priority/highness considering it's the final rank :p

Good Job overall though!

Yeah that last rank really could have used more work, welp, now ik to make rank icons more op on their own without the background stuff, and then add that garnish for extra spice at the end xD
 

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I think you could do a bit more with rendering rocks when painting. Like what you did with the last rock/meteor was nice, surface was more defined even though it was line work. And if you really wanna make things pop, don't be afraid to give the crystals some highlights or sharper colours. Good work otherwise :D
 

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I'd say the crystals definitely need highlights, a bit of shine maybe make the emerald slightly brighter to give it that crystal/gem look rather than plastic.
 

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Hey guys,
I just finished working on a 9 rank icon commission, was curious what your thoughts were! Rank it on a 1/10 scale! and please tell me how you think i could have done them better.
Just in case, the rank order goes:

Coal > Iron > Gold > Diamond > Emerald > Redstone > Lapis >Obsidian > Bedrock.

Oh and which one do you like the most? (I'm thinking Obsidian or Lapis)

Dude, I'd give it a 9/10, it looks amazing!
My favorites are the redstone, obsidian and lapis ones, they look really cool. Other than that, I have no clue how you can make them look better, they are already pretty kewl, lol
 

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Looks really good, Id say there is room for improvement on the coal one but there is always room for improvement. 9/10 Great work!
 

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I think you could do a bit more with rendering rocks when painting. Like what you did with the last rock/meteor was nice, surface was more defined even though it was line work. And if you really wanna make things pop, don't be afraid to give the crystals some highlights or sharper colours. Good work otherwise :D
Hmm i did add a little highlight but it clearly wasnt enough, and the rendering could use some work as well, im getting there slowly though :)
Looks really good, Id say there is room for improvement on the coal one but there is always room for improvement. 9/10 Great work!
"There is always room for improvement" that is very true, hopefully i keep improving as i go :D thanks!
 
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