Signature Design

[Brice]

Bonjour! Aujourd'hui, I bring you a new design I worked on based off a course on skillshare, any feedback is much appreciated.

My feedback:

• Try a different effect with the color blurs
• Maybe experiment with different colors

Others feedback:

• Expand the shape so the lines cover the whole campus. - Liam2
• Change the color of the text - Hannes
• Try it in black and white - Khyree

 

[Christmasly]

nice asf dude!

 

[Brice]

Maybe stretch the lines out so it covers the entire signature.

So the lines cover the whole canvas? If so that seems like a nice way to naturally fill in blank space. Also, I love our avatar

 

[Hannes]

Change the colour of the text.

 

[Kram]

Mess around with the text in my opinion. The background has a 3D effect so maybe try to do that with the text. So it could look like it’s falling or rising. Still looks sexy as always Brice

 

[TinyRick]

I like the idea, but these effects work best on brighter backgrounds

 

[Splitback]

The background distracts me from the name, and you typically want the name to pop out in a signature.
And yeah, changing text color might help as well.

 

[Mhtro]

Change the colour of the text its hardly noticeable, make the background have some type of grunge/texture.
This "style" of text will look better in my opinion:

 

[Brice]

Change the colour of the text its hardly noticeable, make the background have some type of grunge/texture.
This "style" of text will look better in my opinion:

Thanks for the suggestions, I personally wanted the name to be in negative space so it isn't so apparent but I could have pulled it off better