Some opinions (Helpful feedback needed)

[WillFTW]

Hi, I've been working on a new portfolio and this is what I have so far:
http://kotoday.000webhostapp.com/Portfolio_2/

I'd really appreciate some feedback on things I need to change. I obviously know it's not optimized for mobile, I'm doing that later.

Thanks,
Will

 

[WillFTW]

I really hope you aren't referring to this... https://i.zp4rker.me/le6bs.png

Those are placeholders... As I said earlier, I haven't finished.

 

[ZP4RKER]

"This is probably around my 5th or 6th portfolio design and I still don't really feel accomplished."

 

[WillFTW]

"This is probably around my 5th or 6th portfolio design and I still don't really feel accomplished."

Rather than just bashing the content put into the design, could you provide more helpful feedback. I'm also redoing my about section paragraph, I legitimately mindlessly typed it up because I don't like using lorem ipsum.

 

[Callam]

Rather than just bashing the content put into the design, could you provide more helpful feedback. I'm also redoing my about section paragraph, I legitimately mindlessly typed it up because I don't like using lorem ipsum.

You might like this instead.

Here's a couple of things that I noticed. The first thing that I think you should change is the flashing loader. I also feel that the navbar is a little too wide. You need to make the cursor on the portfolio type buttons a pointer (since they're clickable buttons). Another thing I would probably do is arrange the sections of the website in a different order. I would probably let people know who you are and what you do, then show some of your work, and then have a contact section at the bottom (you said this isn't finished so I'm assuming you're working on this part). An order like that just feels like a better flow.

 

[WillFTW]

You might like this instead.

Here's a couple of things that I noticed. The first thing that I think you should change is the flashing loader. I also feel that the navbar is a little too wide. You need to make the cursor on the portfolio type buttons a pointer (since they're clickable buttons). Another thing I would probably do is arrange the sections of the website in a different order. I would probably let people know who you are and what you do, then show some of your work, and then have a contact section at the bottom (you said this isn't finished so I'm assuming you're working on this part). An order like that just feels like a better flow.

Yea, the clickable button's are something I'm gonna do at the finalization part. Shortening the navbar totally makes sense; I've always had a feeling it was a bit too thicc. The organization I feel makes a bit of sense because I was thinking that as a client my main question is "What can I buy" "Some examples of what I can buy" "Who is making it". As a consumer myself, I don't really care about who makes it very much, and I'm assuming that about everyone else. Thus why I chose to put the about last. My contact section I'm working on at the moment; it's not going to be anything special: just some black circles on a yellow background with social media icons and click to copy. But I really appreciate your feedback