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Hello! I am selling 2D and 3D drawn avatars (And logo's if requested) but I am no where near where I want to be when it comes to quality of each drawing. I have picked out, in my opinion, the best that I have made and I would like you to critique them.

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Please do not go easy. If you have a suggestion please let me know. The whole goal of this is to improve!

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What program do you use to make your art? They are very high quality and you pay attention to detail. Very nice :D
I am sure it's quite uncommon but I use Adobe Illustrator for all my art because it's all vector based art ! :) Very crisp lines and no pixels. Also making things so much easier to make smaller (small details especially in the hair) -- No loss in quality when increasing or decreasing sizes :)
 

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Yea, I would say that you have a developed style. Just keep working on what you feel you need to improve on.
Thank you so much! I see you almost everywhere on this section of MC-M and I appreciate your feedback[DOUBLEPOST=1507258932][/DOUBLEPOST]
If there's a way to make them smoother, then it would look even better. Overall, really good.
Of course! Thank you for your critique. Would that be dependent on the quality of the line work or shading / color of said art?
 
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Thank you so much! I see you almost everywhere on this section of MC-M and I appreciate your feedback[DOUBLEPOST=1507258932][/DOUBLEPOST]
Of course! Thank you for your critique. Would that be dependent on the quality of the line work or shading / color of said art?
Haha! Yeah, I am pretty active on MCM. You're welcome!
 

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Awesome thank you! :) I need to figure out a more effective and efficient way to shade my artwork and I know shading is something that help out a lot with improving the quality of the over all piece[DOUBLEPOST=1507263422][/DOUBLEPOST]
One of my favorite commissions by far. The most detailed crown I've ever drawn
 
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Finished up a showcase for a Youtuber named G3N3S1S :)
 

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These are great and usually unless theres something specific someone has to improve on such as shading correctly or something which you have done just draw more. I think the lines could be cleaner on a couple but its probably just image size ;p
 

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Honestly, I don't think you need to change anything. You have a unique style that I haven't really seen others use, and it looks nice too!
 

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Checklist if only you were this good at staffing...

jk man great art btw and ur a great staff lmao
Funny message! At first I didn't see the smaller text at the bottom XD Thank you so much! <3[DOUBLEPOST=1507682505][/DOUBLEPOST]
Honestly, I don't think you need to change anything. You have a unique style that I haven't really seen others use, and it looks nice too!
Thank you so much! <3
 

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i would be mroe than happy to sell you a youtube channel with 39k subs you could upload speedarts to for more publicity and a bigger paycheck
 

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These are great and usually unless theres something specific someone has to improve on such as shading correctly or something which you have done just draw more. I think the lines could be cleaner on a couple but its probably just image size ;p
I know I need to get better with line work and shading in specific but I kind of like it. I believe it's a bit "funner" I guess? with each line being different sizes and widths. Obviously it's not perfect but it's good! :)
 

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I know I need to get better with line work and shading in specific but I kind of like it. I believe it's a bit "funner" I guess? with each line being different sizes and widths. Obviously it's not perfect but it's good! :)
I meant you got shading down. ( Like good )
 

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i would be mroe than happy to sell you a youtube channel with 39k subs you could upload speedarts to for more publicity and a bigger paycheck
I meant you got shading down. ( Like good )
Ah, thank you so much! :) I still think it could be improved though, as there is always room for improvement
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The only thing I can think about is your resolution. It is kind of grainy other than that though amazing.
 

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The only thing I can think about is your resolution. It is kind of grainy other than that though amazing.
The resolution could be just from resizing a JPEG image. I do all of my artwork on illustrator. Would you also recommend upping the resolution from 72 to 300?
 

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The resolution could be just from resizing a JPEG image. I do all of my artwork on illustrator. Would you also recommend upping the resolution from 72 to 300?
Test it out. If it works then it works if it stays the same, use lower resolutions. Art is a trial and error based thing in my opinion.
 
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