How can I improve?

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Hello! I am selling 2D and 3D drawn avatars (And logo's if requested) but I am no where near where I want to be when it comes to quality of each drawing. I have picked out, in my opinion, the best that I have made and I would like you to critique them.

Please do not go easy. If you have a suggestion please let me know. The whole goal of this is to improve!

Thank you,
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Please Pm me prices!

Dm'ed you the prices for the items I am selling! [DOUBLEPOST=1507691813][/DOUBLEPOST]

Test it out. If it works then it works if it stays the same, use lower resolutions. Art is a trial and error based thing in my opinion.

Thank you for the suggestion, I have finished a commission just now and we will see what it looks like in 300 resolution compared to 72[DOUBLEPOST=1507692709][/DOUBLEPOST]

These look quite good!
One thing that you could improve on though, is definitely strokes. You can tell they're jagged and uneven. Also for the yellow tints on the two pictures, they kinda look out of place if you know what i mean. Does give an atmosphere but they kinda just look like they're put there and not actually blended in with the other shades. Overall a neat style though.

Assuming you're talking about the yellow strokes that are intended to make it seem like there is light coming from that side of the picture. I was thinking about doing gradients instead of the strokes but I would like to try it on one of my own projects instead of doing it on someone who is paying for their art.

 

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New commission for a friend and Youtuber Zackaria

 

[DarthDaFatCow]

Looks very nice Because profile pictures are usually pretty small, having some pretty rough lines would be fine but if you were to do some hand drawn on a banner, I think maybe some smoother lines would be better? So if you do plan on making banners I would recommend getting a smooth brush on whatever software you are using. Shadows are a bit too small in my opinion, but other than that absolutely amazing.

 

[herobchanall]

I actually like your art, the only way to improve is actually train. It goes to any other topic.
Training will always make you better .